Zebra : Writing

Help for title?

Help for title?

A Poem by Zebra


This poem is actually about missing someone, for which the setting sun is a metaphor. If you could give me feedback i would appreciate it very very mu..
Once

Once

A Poem by Zebra


“Once” Once, there was a girl A girl who ignored the unrelenting stares Of those who could not comprehend The stares that followed her..
Dunno yet

Dunno yet

A Poem by Zebra


Finsished? or unfinished? is it atleast not crappy? lollll need help with this one, thanks!
Little thing i wrote.......

Little thing i wrote.......

A Poem by Zebra


Hopelessness comes to this spirit WIshing that this had never happened Why did you have to disturb my peace? Now everything is just ephemeral, T..
To Dream

To Dream

A Poem by Zebra


any ideas to add onto this? or is it finished?
Dials and Tribulations

Dials and Tribulations

A Poem by Zebra


“Dials and Tribulations” I told him not to buy it It looked like a flimsy, cheap old thing that could break with one drop He bought i..
I am

I am

A Poem by Zebra


I am I am earth Stubborn, unwilling to give way I am fire Leaping into shadows with light I am rain Washing away pain and sorrow I am w..
Drowning

Drowning

A Poem by Zebra


Rain, that shower of mercy Can't seem to alleviate the pain that I feel at this moment It tries in vain to wipe away sadness I am drowning In a se..
Your Eyes

Your Eyes

A Poem by Zebra


A thousand centuries passed in that single moment When I looked into your eyes Who knew that there could be so much depth within them That I feel a..