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About Me

My Name is Zach. I Love poetry. I write a poem a day most of the time.

My girlfriend and others inspire my work.

I am not the best writer and never claimed to be. But the poems mean things to me, and thats all that counts.
But I Love critiscm on them. Its the only way for me to be better.

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Pauline Ramsey

Posted 17 Years Ago

I'm really happy you're stoked about the story! I'll tell you what though, it will definately have one helluva twist by the end of it. :D That's the only hint I'm giving right now! I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters I have up thus far, I plan on writing more as soon as I get the tweaks worked out of the chapters written so far. Peace out!

Shadkim

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the lovely review! I'm glad you really enjoyed my story, and it makes me happy that you were able to feel the love that Liam felt. That's exactly what I was trying to do and I like to hear when I do a good job.^^

I have the opposite problem - I can't write poetry. I think I can squeak by if I need to write one for within a story, but otherwise, I can't call myself a poet. -_- Poetry takes a lot of time and talent too and it is just as hard as prose. I mean, to publish in that field, it's like a one in a million shot.

To help write stories, you can try writing from the poetry you already have. What was going on in your poem? Imagine what it would be like if it were played out like a movie. Then write what you see in your mind. It's a good way to start! Hope it helps!

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