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Uh... yea.... I really don't know.... Comments?
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Let me know what you think, please. Have I gotten better? Worse? Or just too dull to judge? What can I improve upon?
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Please don't be so judgemental as to read the title and think I mean drugs, or anything as such.
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Didn't know what to title it... I tried, anyway.
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Um... Yea... I don't know what to say. I'm a fake, does that work? Just read the poem, I guess.... I want feedback. It'd be nice if you would tell me ..
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I hate it and the flow isn't right, but I'll post it anyway, I guess.
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My heart bursts,
And at last leaves,
Showing the sadness
Seen underneath.
This fall brings pain,
But I always knew
It would end like this,
Some..
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The longer the wait,
The more it hurts.
Endless hate,
Broken words.
Left alone,
There was nothing
But destruction and lies,
Torn open by all th..
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This isn't what I wanted,
I feel your haunting eyes,
Seeing in the darkness
The falseness of my disguise.
Go back to where you started,
This wasn..
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Hm... Nonsense. Is it even really a poem? Doubtful.
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