Alone

Sometimes not even memories bring comfort...

Memories don't hug,

everything feels cold,

when you're alone in this world,

with no-one to love and hold...

Author's Note

Thank you for reading, all comments appreciated.

Reviews

[Chris]

I understand the thoughts within this one.

[J. J. Nightingale]

These few words pack a punch ... a lonely heart writes ...

HUGS .. Jasmine

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is awesome, in so little detail you describes loneliness to a T! Excellent

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Freezed moments melting memories...........

[Inyourshadow]

Beautifully said C as this is such truth, loneliness is the pits, we all need to be loved. So hugs sent to tide you over till you find mr right. Keep em' coming

[Jvl narasimharao]

You are absolutely true.Loneliness is real hell
yoursJVL

[Marie Harrison]

I love this poem.
It's hard being alone.
I don't do being alone
as welll as I do being part of a half
Yet alone I'm more whole and more together
My memories do feel like a warm hug
They remind me that I'm loved

[MS. BABy]

powerful sentiment inside of a shortstack....I feel for people who won't let go of those moments....I enjoy ur pen

[Hotwater]

How true Sugar, but remember you can always switch memories on, quite a powerful
small poem, it's content probably affects a very large number of people.
*bird*