Lingering Kiss

Just dabbling with a short form...not sure if it's right.

fizzing
his kiss lingers
leaving my lips tingling
like a sherbert lemon
sweet

Author's Note

Cinqain (hopefully)

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Ah sherbert lemons such memories such lasting taste as I surmise would be the same said of your kiss, love the brevity with which you penned this piece Chelle. You capture the very essense of the feeling of kissing in this beautifully penned sweetness. Keep em' coming

[Marie Harrison]

Refreshing