~*~Like Ribbons~*~

~*~Like Ribbons~*~

A Poem by Raspberry Rebel
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A little love poem

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Tangled like ribbons
our souls are entwined.
Strands of love so gentle,
honest and kind,
hold us together
in a tender embrace,
within a union as beautiful
as delicate lace...

© 2011 Raspberry Rebel


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Raspberry Rebel
Thank you for reading and commenting, valued and appreciated. :)

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A little 'goodie' sugar, very nicely done... loads of feeling in such a short space.
*bird*

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tangled like ribbons ~ love this image that there are invisible bonds that bind the lovers hearts together, such romantic words and imagery. Keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love ur shortstacks, they are so gentle and passionate really quickly....beautiful..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 21, 2011
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Raspberry Rebel
Raspberry Rebel

Liverpool, Netherley, United Kingdom



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