Mouthwatering Yumminess~

Mouthwatering Yumminess~

A Poem by Raspberry Rebel
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Jellybeans are so YUM!

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Mango, melon

cherry, berry,

rainbow colours,

how sublime...

 

Lime, lemon,

zesty, zingy,

taste buds dance

double time...

 

Orange oozes,

juicy juices,

tongue tingles,

taste...divine...

© 2011 Raspberry Rebel


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Orange oozes,
juicy juices,
tongue tingles,
taste...divine...

Sensual imagery of food and flowing juices, although I am sure this is an innocent look at fruit and I am just reading too deeply or maybe it works as a double entendre lol Keep em' coming ( no pun intended )

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yum

Posted 13 Years Ago


Orange oozes,
juicy juices,
tongue tingles,
taste...divine...

Sensual imagery of food and flowing juices, although I am sure this is an innocent look at fruit and I am just reading too deeply or maybe it works as a double entendre lol Keep em' coming ( no pun intended )

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love food, I certainly love this poem. It's very good, keep writing :).

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Raspberry Rebel
Raspberry Rebel

Liverpool, Netherley, United Kingdom



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