Dandelions

Dandelions

A Poem by Raspberry Rebel
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My first bunch of flowers from my youngest daughter at the age of 2

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There was a time when dandelions would be

a menace in my lawn of vivid green;

their seed pods bubbling like a foamy sea

would spoil its glossy pristine velvet sheen.

With sprays of every kind I would wage war

but nothing that I did could stop their spread,

those sunny little faces I abhor

would greet me when I rose up from my bed.   

Then one warm sunny morn, her fingers tight

with kiss curls and a grin she offered me,

a tiny gold bouquet, my heart took flight

the wonder on her face a joy to see.

Upon my table top her smile did stay

my weeding war solved by a child at play.

 

 

© 2013 Raspberry Rebel


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thru the eyes of a child eh?

If only we could all hold on to that innocence

A lovely poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...but they grow up so quickly and move away... sigh

a timeworn tale of heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"kiss curls and a grin she offered me,

a tiny gold bouquet, my heart took flight

the wonder on her face a joy to see.

Upon my table top her smile did stay "
A splendid read and write...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely baby, the picture is priceless haha. Keep 'em coming xxxxx

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raspberry Rebel

11 Years Ago

Thank you love, glad you enjoyed baby xxxxxxx

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Raspberry Rebel
Raspberry Rebel

Liverpool, Netherley, United Kingdom



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