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A Poem by ♋ Iris ♋

You said you wouldn't hurt me.
You even promised.
We didn't do anything wrong.
Now we cant even talk.

Maybe I am wrong.
Did I do something wrong?
If I did, I am sorry.
Even if I did, should you really break that promise?

Its just a simple statement.
I am not saying that you hurt me.
All I am saying is why?
Why take the chance of hurting me if you promised not to?

Don't worry about it.
I'll live.
No reason to get pulled down from this.
It's not the first time I lost a friend.

© 2012 ♋ Iris ♋


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Awwww... This is so sad... this is well written too. Your reader can easily feel what you're saying where it matters most. well done. Adding this to my library. I love it.

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♋ Iris ♋
♋ Iris ♋

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MUSE OF SPACE PROSPIT DREAMER Iris is my pen name. My real name is Jessa. I am laid back most of the time. love anime and manga. I am a teenager but I dont know if you can say average. I .. more..

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