Is Death That Bad?

Is Death That Bad?

A Poem by ♋ Iris ♋
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Just random thoughts. And I'm bored in class so why not :P

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I dont want to be here anymore. 
I want to leave it all behind.
What am I even good for?
I feel like I am living in a bind.
The yelling and screaming is getting old.
Mom and my step dad don't seem to notice.
I feel like I am left out in the cold.
Not to mention what happened between me and Chris.
I don't want to feel the way I feel now.
I feel like I am unwanted.
I feel as though I can escape this somehow.
What would happen if I ended up dead?
I have a few friends that still care.
They actually care and would be sad.
For them, everything would be better if I were not here.
In the end I couldn't hurt them, and they would be glad.
I was ready to do it.
I was going to leave it all.
But one of my friends threw a fit.
They weren't about to let me fall.

© 2012 ♋ Iris ♋


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Its realy good but very sad.
XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good random writing. Honestly, I can relate to some of this, and the way you wrote it makes it seem as though it wasn't just random thoughts out of boredom. Regardless of that, it's very well written. It's a bit distant of emotions, but the ending is strong and reassures hope. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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♋ Iris ♋
♋ Iris ♋

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MUSE OF SPACE PROSPIT DREAMER Iris is my pen name. My real name is Jessa. I am laid back most of the time. love anime and manga. I am a teenager but I dont know if you can say average. I .. more..

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