Remember

The girl wished that she could see the spring one more time.

She looked up at the sky in her bed as the snow came down.

She loved the snow.

She loved to play outside as a kid in the snow. 

She loved summer.

Her nickname was fish because once you got her into the water she never wanted out.

She loved the fall.

She would rake the leaves in her yard and then mess the yard up again with leave fights  with her two sisters.

The season she loved the most, was spring.

Her favorite memories were sitting in her grandmother's kitchen, opening the packs of seeds that were about to be put into warm water for a few weeks to sprout.

The seeds did indeed sprout and next it was time to plant them in plastic cups.

Her grandma would always start flicking the dirt around and the girl would start in only leaving the place even more dirty.

When the seed grown a bit into blooms it was time for the outside gardening to begin.

After many weeks of waiting the most beautiful flowers that the girl had ever seen would have flaunted themselves from the ground.

The girl smiled at the memory as she watched the snow fall on a chilling morning.

Her eyes start to blur and she says to herself, "I think I will take a nap."

The girls eyes close and the constant beeping noise in the background turns into a flat siren-ish noise that alerts the doctors that everything is not ok.

When the girl wakes up she sees that there is a lot of blurred colors around her.

She sits up and rubs her eyes. 

She looks around and sees there is a beautiful garden.

She stands up and realizes that there is no more pain.

She can move without feeling any sense of feeling that is negative or bad.

She enjoys the aroma of the flowers so much that she doesn't even notice that someone was behind her till she felt the tap on her shoulder.

She looked up and saw the man and she instantly knew that this man was who what depicted as Him.

She bowed on her knees but He took her hand and stood her up.

"Welcome to my garden." He said motioning to the area around them.

"Its a very beautiful garden." The girl said looking around and seeing how vast the place really was.

"You could stay here in the garden if you want to. I only have the best things in my garden." 

The girl smiled and nodded her head eagerly. 

"I have another surprise for you." He said and walked the girl over around a big tree.

"Grandma!" The girl runs over and is reunited with her grandmother without the fear and pain of the cancer running through her anymore.

Reviews

[SheaRyhai]

"She looked at the sky (from) her bed..." -suggestion

there seems to be a little trouble with formatting, like you entered yourself instead of letting the document you wrote this on do it automatically :) It's slightly distracting, but simply enough to fix I hope.

This is a really touching and sad read. The images you created were so soft and gentle they contrasted well with the cancer she suffered from. My biggest recommendation is to avoid sentences starting with the same words, its overly repetitive and subtracts for the story's over all impact. (just my thoughts)

Thank you for sharing :) Enjoyed the read.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This has an "Alice in Wonderland" feel to it... Awaking in a beautiful garden is nice concept. I like this story. Nicely done!

[No name]

Very sad but beautiful story. I love it.

[Sarah]

It is very sad but i loved it.
XD

[♋ Iris ♋]

I left that open to your imagination. Whatever you see fit her age is how you feel it and understand it.

[- - -]

I love it Jes but I must ask how old is the lil girl? Is she like 8 or older? idk why I'm just curious