Smile

Smile

A Poem by ♋ Iris ♋

I don't know how you do it.
I don't know how you keep me around
I don't know how someone like me; someone unfit
could be with you, the one who has helped me off the ground.
There is so much I could say about the way you make me feel.
So many things I've tried telling you before.
You and your thick head of steel. 
I don't know why you fight me when I say "I love you" even though we have both said it and swore.

My days used to be so much different without you here.
I was always away to be secluded.
I don't think that I have ever been this sincere.
  I no longer want to be excluded. 
Your arms are the safest thing in the world to me.
The soft embrace of yours helps almost all of the bad days.
You make me smile and help with the problems you don't even see.
You've helped me change my old habits, my old ways.

You're stubborn and kind of blind to obvious things.
You drive me crazy when you don't listen.
I don't know how you cant see the happiness that you being in my life brings.
Have you never noticed my smiles? The ones you have given?
I laugh at all of our inside jokes and smile at the cute faces you make.  
You're in my life now and you're not getting away.
I know that staying with you is not a mistake.
So I guess we all just want to say:

We love you

© 2013 ♋ Iris ♋


Author's Note

♋ Iris ♋
All of us wanted to write something for our guys so here it is.

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I love how unique this piece is. I never thought of doing a collaborative piece like this and it turned out so well. Amazing job. I hope the people it was for see as much love and honesty in this as i do. Great job.

"Your arms are the safest thing in the world to me.
The soft embrace of yours helps almost all of the bad days.
You make me smile and help with the problems you don't even see.
You've helped me change my old habits, my old ways."

^ Most definitely my favorite stanza.


Posted 10 Years Ago


This is formatted poetry. This poem took time and thought and for that I give kudos.

Posted 10 Years Ago


haha nice ;) very nice idea..i think the color was a creative idea cuz ive read 20 poems and this one was the funnest to read.very nice and hope ur guy likes it
-soul

Posted 10 Years Ago


♋ Iris ♋

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much ^_^
soulesswriter

10 Years Ago

no problem
-soul
Such an amazing piece girl !! i loved it , it is so emotional and honest and reel , i know that cuz i've been in the same situation as you are and those the exact same words i used to repeat , so good job i's like you're in every girl's in love mind (y) keep on this way

Posted 11 Years Ago


♋ Iris ♋

11 Years Ago

:D Thanks for the review~!
lovergirl

11 Years Ago

you're very welcome ;)
Ah, the emotions of young females always makes for interesting reads, and this one is pure emotion.
Expressive and real,
Thanks for the share

Posted 11 Years Ago


We all three enjoyed this very much :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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♋ Iris ♋
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MUSE OF SPACE PROSPIT DREAMER Iris is my pen name. My real name is Jessa. I am laid back most of the time. love anime and manga. I am a teenager but I dont know if you can say average. I .. more..

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