Depth of the Sky.

Depth of the Sky.

A Poem by ♋ Iris ♋
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This poem was written by a friend of mine.

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Ever notice how no matter how far you reach,
you can never touch the sky?

Ever notice whenever someone tells you to reach for your goals,
you automatically think of the stars?

Ever notice that when someone says heaven,
you instantly think of something beyond the clouds?

These references are all trying to tell us one thing:
Keep your head up and look forward to what will happen.

© 2012 ♋ Iris ♋


Author's Note

♋ Iris ♋
By Saphire~!

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you got it, well, that's a pretty deep depth of sky..lol, i liked it, colorin' was colorful, words're in wordin' n seem powerful...it's a nice n lovely write that i've read right here.
i liked it, it's an quniue n deep writin' as i saw. Each has contained so much appropriate words n that's an amazin' to read..to think.
well, it's piece, nice flow of ink, i liked each nevery line and it's at last a beautiful piece.
well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


i didn't know fire wrote! awesome poem :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good write my friend

Posted 11 Years Ago


♋ Iris ♋

11 Years Ago

Thankies~! ^_^
Keep your head up and look forward to what will happen.
I loved this line. Nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it. Your friend is also a great writer. But I admire you for sharing it and telling that it is hers.
Dreams are like stars, heavens, sky, etc. But no matter how far or how high they are, we should always remember that there are ways to get there...at the right time.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tell your friend their very talented!

Posted 11 Years Ago


♋ Iris ♋

11 Years Ago

She will be glad to hear your comment. Thanks for the review~! ^_^
The colors made me slightly nauseous. And I answered 'no' to two of the three questions. But, that shouldn't matter a lot--you didn't write it?

Posted 11 Years Ago


♋ Iris ♋

11 Years Ago

A very close friend of mine wrote it.
awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amazing Fire. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dude...I seriously love this~ nice

Posted 11 Years Ago



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♋ Iris ♋
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MUSE OF SPACE PROSPIT DREAMER Iris is my pen name. My real name is Jessa. I am laid back most of the time. love anime and manga. I am a teenager but I dont know if you can say average. I .. more..

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