My Prayer

My Prayer

A Poem by ♋ Iris ♋
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This is my prayer to God...

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If you knew me you would know I am not religious. 
I dont go to church and i don't pray every night.
I know I am not the perfect person on this earth but...
I am praying for the strength for my friends to fight.

One is scared to death.
She is having medical problems and I am really scared.
I look to you for help for this.
You are supposed to be the one who made the human race...who cared. 

My other friend is scared to death for the same reason as I am.
She has known this one longer than I.
I pray for hope and safety for the both of them.
I am on me knees here and looking up to the sky.

God, I pray for my fighter.
She has been through so much and will need strength and love.
She feels like nothing will get better.
Is there any reprieve of that pain that she can get from above?

I know I am not perfect.
I know that I have been selfish and have sinned...
but God if you are listening to this sinner...
please look after them...because each and everyone one of them is my friend...

© 2012 ♋ Iris ♋


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Jessa,
It is an epic piece.
It is crafted so nicely that many people may read it as prayer.
I am touched by the wonderful words you said in supplication.
Added to my reading and favorite lists.
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


You can show her how strong YOU are by not cutting. Support is so strong for recovery and feeling alone at times when the rest of the world washes away for sleep at night. THEY are left to wonder, and worry for the very ones that say they support them. When my sister died, I had no idea what to do, and my sister played a great role in supporting her through it, by always showing up on time, acting like not that much has changed, making her feel like NOTHING at all ia any kind of burden.... at all!! : ) This POEM is prayer. THIS is where you learn how to "pray". xoxo -Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


a great sentiment, and keep your prayers in your being ... and also remember, one of the greatest ideas is that the reason G-d created the Universe, is because G-d loves Stories.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Touching.... and beautiful. I'll be praying for you and your friends too

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nothing could be any greater than this ever..

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is beautiful Jess. I love it. :')

Posted 12 Years Ago



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♋ Iris ♋
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MUSE OF SPACE PROSPIT DREAMER Iris is my pen name. My real name is Jessa. I am laid back most of the time. love anime and manga. I am a teenager but I dont know if you can say average. I .. more..

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