So Tired

I’m just

So tired

Of making

Everyone

Angry

 

So maybe

I should

Just hide

And never

Speak

 

In the end

My words

Cause

Nothing but

Grief

 

So I

Pray that

Nobody

Talks to

Me

Author's Note

Constructive critiques appreciated.

Reviews

[fireblossom]

There is nothing to add or take away from this poem. It is complete. It is simple and straight. I like the layout. Graphically it is spare. The layout adds to the voice that wants to disappear, hide out under the stairs quiet.

Good writing.

[Julie Morgan]

Thanks so much!

[zainul]

Appreciate your way to release frustration/depression.
Does this kind of writes help you?

[Julie Morgan]

Thanks. :) It does calm me down for the day usually. Although the feelings always come back.

[zainul]

You are welcome.
Do you find comfort or relief in music,prayer,games,hanging out or in any other work?

[Julie Morgan]

Drawing, listening to music, writing, and sleeping are the main things I turn to when stressed.

[zainul]

That's great.
I pray and hope that live a comfortable life in your own way.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I want to talk to you