I Don't Write Poems For Your Comfort Zone

Jus read

I don't write to make you feel happy

I'm not suppose to make u feel easy

I dont spill my heart for you to smile

I do it so you can understand i feel vile

Sick with unease

And pained with emotional disease

I dont want you to laugh at my poems

I want them to explore your inner thoughts in your domes

Get into the abandoned corner of your mind that hides your secret thoughts

I want you to feel so uncomfortable that you twitch with unease

To have your blood rush through your veins while your heart rates increase

Want you to sit on the edge of your seat 

As your hearts battles an abnormal beat

I want your minds to ooze of many emotions 

As you sit there in a still motion

I want you to dig deep for your hidden feelings

And finally express them like natural human beings

Need you to open your minds to my thoughts 

So your minds won't sit there closed to rot 

I want you to explore your weird side

And finally exclaim to that side to open wide

Remember what I told you I don't want you to fill with comfort

So its time to break down that emotional fort

Open and accept who you are in this zone

Because your finally coming out of your comfort zone

Author's Note

aye give me your thoughts do u like people to read yuor poems with this emotions or wat hinest feedback is best =]

Reviews

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You said it all here, I know what you are talking about.

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I know what you are talking about here.
I like this, it's plain and simple and so honest.
Well Stated!