See
A Poem by Z
More on the ideas of sex, violence, and consumption
just turn on the tv
we'll talk about this later
see
we're normal again
everything will be fine
like all those people
you'll see
like in the movies
they love each other
even when the rain starts falling
their fists won't start flying
they always kiss
and have great make up sex
see......
sex solves everything
and love
two things we all get
tangled up in
always sticky
always so messy
see
this never makes us happy
all the love and sex
they're just distractions
like shopping
yes...... you see it!
love, sex, shopping
all the same
we don't even love ourselves
thats why we need
distractions
and........
PIE!
Yes! Pie sounds delicious
can it be apple pie?
like the one's they sell at Mcdonalds
that would be nice
the tv will have to do
i wonder what kind of sex they'll have today?
© 2010 Z
Author's Note
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ignore the grammar...... if you are a spelling nazi go edit your school newspaper, they probably need it
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Reviews
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This is an interesting piece, and while it may be true for some i have to dissagree with the overall message that love is like shopping:P
but i understand how youd see it that way, and sex too, has lost its power for most. Its something cheap and common and meaningless to most... but for some of us these things still hold a spark, a meaning, hope...
You do a great job, of portraying the common person though, how a large majority of modern people think. It is avery nice write:P i like pie too... it does sound really delicous...
Posted 15 Years Ago
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Added on January 23, 2009
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ZSanta Clarita, CA
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Musician, Poet, Artist, Advocate, Activist, Label Enthusiast, shield maker, barrier wrecker, romantically isolated, intel separated, suburban protester, middle class complainer, graffiti painter
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