Lilies in the Field

lilies in the field

telling me

to leave the wheel

and to set myself free

 

now to cover my tracks

and never look back

to look for today

and wait for her to say

its only a game

its always the same

 

now the lilies in the field

telling me

to believe what i feel

and speak what i mean

 

to never think of hate

or rely on his fate

and stray from the pack

avoid the great path

and laugh at the rider

to die a martyr

 

lilies in the field

tellling me

my fate in seal

i maybe free

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Constance L. Hartwell]

what a beautiful poem. kudos

[Bluet_Belle]

I LOVE THIS

The format is great, it all flows well, i like your line breaks, and i love the message behind this piece.

"to never think of hate
or rely on his fate
and stray from the pack
avoid the great path
and laugh at the rider
to die a martyr"

Great write:) i look forward to reading more sometime:)