Take It Slow...

"ummm....I-I'm still a virgin."

"What?" he says shocked.

"I-I'm still a virgin..." i say covering my face in shame. He probably won't want me anymore I have no experience. I'm a 22 year old virgin. Its embarrassing.

"It's okay...really Ember.....lets just...take this slow..."

"you still want to?"

"I'd love to be the person to show you how your body should feel."

"oh....."  

"why haven't you though...."

"I don't know....just nervous.." 

"just relax..."

He starts kissing me again. His body moving with mine. I kick off my shoes while gripping onto his arms. He stops only to pull his shirt off over his head. Its just as I taught. His body is toned.I explore him with m hands as his lips meet mine.His abs and v-line look and feel like they've been carved as a statue. His skin so smooth. He moves his lower body between my legs and I wrap my legs around his waist. I feel his growing erection against me and I start breathing heavily. This is really finally happening. He moves so that we're both sitting up. Me still on his lap. He starts unbuttoning my dress again and pulls in off of me. I try covering my body with my arms but he holds my arms to my sides.

"so beautiful..." he whispers, looking into my eyes.

He reaches around and undoes the clip to my bra. As he pulls it off, his fingers graze my skin, sending a shock through my entire body. He lays me on my back again and starts touching me all over. I reach down and start undoing the zipper to his pants. He grins against my neck as he kisses it and moves out of his pants, letting them drop onto the fall. He shoves his tongue in my mouth and moves his hand down to my vagina, into my underwear. I gasp when he starts stroking me. I pull away from the kiss as he continues the work with his hand. I feel so wet down there. I clench my eyes up, tilting my head back.

"uhhhh......" i let out my first moan as he moves a finger inside me.

"f**k do that again....you moan so sexy.." he says with so much want in his voice. I giggle at his request but still moan afterwards. He slips another finger inside me making me jump.

"uhhh...yes.." i hiss through my teeth.

"tell me you want me...." he says pulling my underwear off, making me now, completely naked.

"I want you...." I whisper as he kisses and sucks the line of my collar bone.

"how badly..." he says pulling off his boxers.I can't help but look down. Oh god. He's bigger than I expected.I get nervous again. I think about how much pain I'm about to be in. How much bigger he'll feel inside me. Still...

"So badly..." I saw pulling his face back up to mine to kiss him. He rolls on a condom gets into position. He starts pushing inside me and as soon as I feel the head pop inside me I clench up my eyes. F**k does it hurt. He starts pushing more inside me and I feel like I'm being ripped from the inside out. I grip onto his back once he's fully entered me. He stays still for about a minute,allowing me to adjust a little to him inside me. 

"I'm going to start moving now.." he whispers into my ear. I nod because frankly, I don't know if I can make a noise other then winces and groans of pain.He pulls out of me a little then pushes back inside me. Continuing this over and over. I have my eyes closed the whole time. It hurts so much I regret waiting so long.

"Ahhh!" I let out a scream finally.

'I'm sorry.."

I start dragging my nails down his back.Trying to focus on something other then the pain. He slams his mouth onto mine making me scream into him mouth. He bites my lip. He's going slow to not make it hurt so badly. 

After about fifteen minutes, the pain has faded more, but its still there. I feel the pleasure more than it though. I gripping onto his arms. Biting his lip. I finally open my eyes to see him looking down at me. His eyes low. I manage a small grin on my face and his face lights up. Like he was upset that he was hurting me.

"yessss......' i moan through my teeth. I continuing moan as I feel the pleasure more and more. He feels good inside me. He starts doing it a little faster and it starts feeling amazing. I start moving with him and he bites his lip while looking at me. 

"f**k......" he hisses.

"UHH....Jeremy......." i drag my nails down his back and tighten my legs around him. I feel myself getting there. Oh god, I'm about to burst.

"f**k say my name again...please..."

"Jeremy..." I whisper the moan of his name in his ear and he goes off. He starts sucking on my neck again. He steadies himself on his elbows while thrusting inside me. Hissing 'f**k' over and over again. I grip onto him tighter and I come, moaning his name loudly. He comes within seconds of me, thrusting through his climax.

He collapses on top of me and we both just lye there, panting. As I begin to regain my breath I start running my hair through his hair. His forehead and chest is sweaty. Come to think of it, so am I. I feel my eyes getting lower. He climbs up closer to my face and kisses me. This kiss isn't the same as all the other ones.This one has so much meaning. It has so much...need and want. The kiss finally stops and he lays next to me.I lay my head on his shoulder and he wraps his arm around me. He pulls the cover over us and we fall asleep.

Reviews

[Amaya Sullivan]

The am still loving the storyline, and you should read through your chapters out loud for typos. I think, this chapter is rushed like the ending to the last. It seems you are about to come to a major reveal you have thought through and anxious to get there.

This chapter should be "Taken Slow" since this is Embers first time. She should nervous and filled with so many different emotions then with a sense of regret as she feels pain when he enters her. (I don't know if it should be fifteen minutes worth, but I guess it's okay.) More description should be given of how she felt or if he was at all hesitant since he is a "nice" guy after all.

This part is awkward:

"you still want to?"

"I'd love to be the person to show you how your body should feel."

I am not sure if Jeremy said both of these things or if Ember said the last line. This is where you could lead into description.

"Are you sure you want to do this? I'd love to be the person to show you how your body should feel," he asks with a sense of comfort from my embarrassment. Laying beside me, he was waiting for my answer. I am 22 years old and still a virgin; he seems like a nice guy, and I really like him.

I hope this helps.