But She

  Lo? She speaks, 

Soft, sweet, rendering grace,

  honey lozenges to my soul

Lo? She moves,

   Smooth, like a red wine,

 unpretentious like a saint

Lo? She glows,

  Harnessing the energy of thousands,

   through her golden eyes

Lo? She is mine,

     Too beautiful for me,

      but she loves me so

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I wonder if Lo was a word used to draw attention or Lo as in Lolita. In this way, the the poem has a double-meaning. But honestly, It makes me think of Lolita...not necessarily the protagonist in Nakobov's novel or the general definition of a lolita. Rather a sweet young girl that has a very heavenly aura attracting all (girls, women, boys, men, elders, animals) and gracing and blessing them with her shimmering eyes and sweet smile. I thought your poem was very dulcet.

[ashleymarie]

This was very interesting! Not in a bad way. It was beautiful.

[Jamestown]

Beautiful write, love the sincere emotions! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[fireblossom]

Beautifully written. A loving tribute. Sweet, simple and lovely.