Smile at empty lines...

Last few sentences,
wrote on paper.
Last goodbyes,
and gone away.
Thats when i say..

 

 

"if you didnt get it,
i dont care.
Nothings ever fair.
You want to step away,
well so do i.
These words, they
never lie."

 

 

Your so tired,
and im running far.
Last thing,
ill leave this for
you too read.
thats when you say..

 

 

"if you didnt get it,
i dont care,
nothings ever fair.
you want to step away,
well so do i.
these words, they
never lie."

 

 

Time is fading.
Differant scenes.
They play in
black and white.
those words i know,
were always right.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

Really, lyrical. I actually found myself trying to sing this. Love this again. You keep appealing to my rockin side with deep cuttin' words:)

[Devons]

Quite an intense piece of writing which needs care in the reading to digest the meaning, since the words flow so easily that you can find yourself being passed by or passing by what is the revolving core of the poem. It's like a negative, predictable cycle that is being portrayed in the shape of a relationship; a preordained inevitability that one day it would always end this way. This is the impression it leaves me with. "Those words were always right." Interesting that both players in this drama say the same things...
Told with your usual cool fatalism, and snappy, smart phraseology.

[Ladysue]

This read like a wonderfully flowing song. Sad, but beautifully expressed...nicely done...

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

I feel ya hun, I do....

[Middling]

A goodbye note, maybe to a boy/girlfriend or maybe to parents. Good poem, gives food for thought!

[Kiddx]

"if you didnt get it,
i dont care.
Nothings ever fair.
You want to step away,
well so do i.
These words, they
never lie."

LOVE these words, so very truthful. Splendid write.