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A Poem by sheriH 2

Why can't I ever  be enough for you?
You say I'm beautiful like a angle from above.
Do you mean those words when you
Look  at other women with such a warm glance?
You say I'm your everything your 
One and only.
Do you remember those words when your with
That other women?
You say you care about me more then anything.
Do you mean those words when you know 
What hurt and dispear you cause me?
You said you loved me and that you wanted
This to one to last.
But  in truth i saw the last one better then us..
Why can't I be seen the same?
Why?

© 2014 sheriH 2


Author's Note

sheriH 2
Did i do good ™n this i feel like i cant grasp anything right anymmore

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No you did an amazing job I understood it there weren't any errors and its an amazing poem its amazing.:D


Posted 10 Years Ago


TheWhiteKnight

10 Years Ago

Thank you for sending me a friends request and i look forward to read more of your writing.
sheriH 2

10 Years Ago

Your welcome I sent that request because I was fond of ur work and hope to read more
keep up t.. read more
TheWhiteKnight

10 Years Ago

Thanks lately I haven't been able to find any inspiration but I am getting there.


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Added on September 28, 2014
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sheriH 2
sheriH 2

Stockton, CA



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Im a person who is allways thinking how things work what makes them tick , what gives them peruse , how they're used. I spend my days writing and daydreaming I get lost in the world of my surroun.. more..

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