candy land

Small candy house's. 

Little cookie people roaming around

Candy cain side walks and roads.

Mountains and valley's made of prue sugar and gum drops.

A little brown river made of chocolate , it streams

down my feet and hand's as I lick the delicious sweet.

I wake up...

Im in an ordinary room made of wood and paint.

I sigh..

I then smile as I look out the ordinary window and see nothing but beauty.

If one could make their own paradise, then the world around you

is imagination and reality is your dream.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[DeathHaze]

Keep the great writing up :)

[sheriH 2]

Kay I will ^_^

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Brilliant I love it.

Thank you for sharing.

Makes you want candy after
reading too HA...HA but still
Brilliant.


I sigh..

I then smile as I look out the ordinary window and see nothing but beauty.

If one could make their own paradise, then the world around you

is imagination and reality is your dream.


Blessings. Kindred poet

[sheriH 2]

Thank you for your kind word's , im glad you enjoyed it ^_^
Blessings.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Bluefire]

"If one could make their own paradise, then the world around you
is imagination and reality is your dream."
I love that line. I also love the story to this.
It's brilliant!

[sheriH 2]

Thank you im glad you enjoyed it ^_^

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^