just right?

have you ever wondered whats just right,

im wondering that tonight,

i want to see you tonight.

god had taken you,

to somewhere in the unknown.

i try to figure whats just right.

maybe i was ment to lose you tonight.

i try to sleep,

but it's hard to move. 

when i think and think of whats just right.

Author's Note

this is about my mom. R.I.P. mom
i love you mom forever

Reviews

[Moon]

This is sad and nicely written . I am sorry for your loss .

[Brittany]

Wow, thats how i felt when i lost my grandpa. me and him where close. Just like you and your mom. very beautiful.

[Alex Vidmar]

Awwww... So sad... But so beautiful

[Aly Jones]

This is so touching, it brings tears to my eyes. I had just recently suffered a loss, too, so I know how you feel.

If you ever wanna talk, let me know. :,)

[Suditi]

Oh my.
I am so sorry for your loss.

And this poem goes beyond critique.
Really touching.