through the mirror, i see her

just something im feeling

as i look through the foggy mirror,
my life flashes before my eyes,
the candles fire flare with great despair.
but the moment i looked through the mirror,
i saw someone who wasn't actually there.
i saw my mom who had died that year.
it was like nothing has changed, 
but as soon as i opened my eyes she wasn't there.
it was to good to be true,
but to far to be a lie.
but if i close my eyes, 
i see her all the time. 
i love you and see you in the mirror all the time.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The candles fire
flare with great despair.
A nice write.

[Bare trees]

Very nicely done and very touching.

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, a very beautiful poem, so much emotions that ignited in such a few lines...I truly relate to this poem, in losing a loved one.

[Ms.Bri]

..Nice poem i really loved it. shows true emotion. i look forward to reading more of your work.

[Lina Grey]

Beautiful poem. Thank you.

[Distant horizons]

beautiful.