Faulty Friendships

Friends, no matter what, are supposed to always be there,

they should be there to listen to your worries,

they should show how much they care,

not having to constantly say they are sorry.

Friends, no matter what, are supposed to be for life,

they should be there to make sure you have fun,

not stab you, when your back is turned, with a knife,

and not wait a year to say sorry for what they have done.

Friends, no matter what, are supposed to make you feel better,

they should be there to believe you over others,

not turn their backs after reading a stupid letter,

and not when they don't approve of your lovers.

Friends, no matter what, are supposed to be trustworthy,

they should be there to comfort you when things are bad,

not make your life even more topsy-turvy,

and not make you feel THIS sad!

Reviews

[NITHIN PURPLE]

very glad to see about friends,are helpful and wipes the worries away,idea is good and the rhyme i liked...

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you for your comments :)

[Riley Bray]

I both agree and disagree with a lot in this poem, but I still found it to be resonating with truth. Very good job. :)

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thanks for your review. I think everyone has a different view of friendship, which is why people fall out, and why there is always a closest friend. Everyone has their own opinions regarding morals, etc. which are always going to cause conflict. :)

[Riley Bray]

I very much agree with that.

[minnie:)]

this is all true, i know wut it feels like for everything on here, well except for the lovers part.... to young for that XD
anyway, great poem

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you, I am glad you feel you can relate (to almost all of the poem). :)

[minnie:)]

loved it:)

[Prritiy]

real feelings poured out for how friends should be. i think the same :)

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Thank you for your review :) If we both feel the same way about how friends should be, maybe we have the right idea of what makes a friend, a true friend.

[Prritiy]

:)