Inspirations of Eve

She’s smiles with elegant designs

And flashes like a light too bright to see

She portrays luxuries

With raspberries

She is what you’d only experience

In some Euro film

 

She becomes the shadows on the wall

Or the texture

For your paint

As she dances

In your unkept garden

She can blissfully blow your wind away

 

With eyes so enchanted

Like crystal 

Under the moon at midnight

Her elegance

Is out of your league

While to the blind she gives sight

 

As she hands you the head of Zeus

Strange signs appear

But in the quietness of the fact

There is really no fear

 

I gently smile

But only to myself

For love encounters the universe

And tosses the stars

For eternity

Yet the world sees

And the world watches

As all the cars go by.

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

There is a lot of insight to this poem :) The use of the head of Zeus is perfectly used!
I adore this love, beautifully told, tale like and moving, universal and captivating!
xx

[Nobody.]

a beautiful construct. love the thin connectivity of thought....and the metaphors are glorious. you are a great poet. I am glad to have read this.

cheers!