Scared to Fall Again

My very first poem

I'm afraid to fall again,

afraid that I'll get hurt.

Love is a game for them,

While I'm sitting in this dirt.

They tell you they love you,

they tell you they care.

I'm stuck to you like glue,

I'm trapped with no air.

Promise me you won't leave,

promise me you'll stay.

I have my heart on my sleeve,

and it won't go away.

I can feel my heart breaking,

and you aren't even here.

I can slowly feel my heart dying,

losing all hope with these tears.

You said ''I love you'',

you said ''I care''.

but if you really did love me,

why'd you leave me in despair.

Our story's over now,

the love is all gone.

So please take a bow,

a new chapter has begun.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, I'm not the best at it. But this is my very first official poem and I would love some feedback, did you relate to it? Did you like it? Please let me know .

Reviews

[jesserose99]

I like this, I can feel your heartache...clearly you felt really close to this individual. The only thing I wasn't sure about fitting was the taking a bow...but that might be just me. Really great work. Fast read, I wanted to read again. Good job!!

[Zoe Taschereau]

Thank you so much! I too was not too fitting about the taking a bow! I'm really stuck on this part! but I really appreciate your review! :)

[Pete]

Very nice. I can feel the hurt.

[Krizito]

Clear words, great storyline, nice poetry. If this is the 1st, I can only imagine how the second will be. #never-stop-writing.