Don't you hate it when you're being led on and on and on by someone whom you truly love? Don't you hate it when you have no clue where the relationship is going?
I thought this was very true and lots of people can relate to this whether it be friends, boyfriends/girlfriends, family member, etc. I thought this was really good. I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.
This is very easy to relate to, at least it is for me. Being lead on, falling for someone who only hurts you, is such a pain. They leave you and you feel so crushed, so broken. You feel like your very heart, your very soul, has been squeezed from you, stolen and never returned. You thought everything was fine, or at least your mind tried to convince you of that to keep you happy. It is so stressful if you know better. This is a marvelous write. Nice job.
I'm Zoie Esther, therefore, by default, I'm awesome.
Okay, right. Now on to more serious stuff. I'm only 17, go easy on me, haha. I don't mind critiques, just be reasonable. I would love to hear what.. more..