shattered glass

hollow, empty

my body lay

my heart of glass

not of clay

love once enlightened,

but now that is gone

flesh was torn, scratched away by the nails

of the hands that use to hold me

in pain i shreak

until you found my rib cage

crack! you broke my ribs

turned  them to dust

sprinkled it in the air

to where it formed a bloody must

i struggled but nothing in this world could pull me away

a bullet to the heart must not have been enough

each word like a dagger

each kiss filled posion

each embrace slowly closing in to choking distance

after the dust resides

in pain i scream and cry

you restrain me, i fight no more

for love  is death

you stare blankly in my open chest

as i bleed a bloody mess

your hands shake vigoriously

but you manage to remove my heart within 1,2,3

my heart of glass, which belongs to you

you hold out far and snap it in two

within rage you throw it ground

shattered glass is all that is found

my body lay open on the table

my face turned my eyes red, my body grey

for love i am dead

coated in loves dismay

 

 

Reviews

[TearsDontCompute]

Aww mine sounds like this one, too >:/

Note to self: Read competition's work before looking like a poser.

I like this. It's seeing everything in a way you wouldn't think would be done. Excellent work (:

[Cassandra D.]

This was pretty cool and very descriptive :)