forever gone

forever gone

A Poem by ZmH

my heart aches with a pain

that to you i could never explain

i loved, but now wish upon this loss

i want you to be a distant thought

my dreams haunt me, taunt me with your love

i throw back my head and look above,

beyond to the future

i shall not stand this torture

i fall back into my dreams

tears fulfilled by your company

forever gone is what i wish you to be

so i may have a beautiful sleep

© 2009 ZmH


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Those hope and memory become dead weight. Hard to toss a side. A sad and powerful flow of words. Those demons are always with us unless we can leave the country. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this poem so much! It just expresses so well how much you wish that you could completely forget the other person just after a really bad breakup. Adding this to my library for sure!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Defiantly one of your stronger pieces. I can feel all the emotion and I can see the thought you put behind it. Great flow and a nice story telling poem. If that makes sense lol
Great job

Posted 14 Years Ago


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