what if

inspired by Love Happens

the rain beat down

the thunder trembled the nearest town

words hit like lightning

the loss was so frightning

her memory, her life

taken right before my eyes

a consequence of my own desire

my anger burned hotter then the coals of a blue fire 

the sreech of the car, of her voice still echoes in my head

what if it were me, what if i was dead?

she'd be here in my place

my face sketched in her mind

my belongings in her embrace

her tears would no longer come

her joy would bring fear

he life without love

her life without her dear

what if it were me, instead of her?

would she stare out the window hoping to see me return?

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sexy P3nguin]

Amazing job Zoe. Thanks for sending me a request to read this. It has a great flow, amaxing word choice and great story behind it. It really makes the reader think. Always I am blown away by what you write and in this case it is no different. Great job

Dustin~