beauty in dying

have u ever heard the phrase beauty in dying?

the beating of my heart fades ever so slowly

one day to leave me dead without my knowing

my breath lighter and lighter with every step

learning life in depth

my mind fills with cobwebs

taking away all memories

maybe one day ill see,

the beauty in dying

some loved ones cry,

some not even one tear shall fall fron their eye

they feel as though their heart is breaking

because of my life being the one for taking

they grasp on to every hope

shall i live, nope

vision goes blurry

sad, sad picture painted in my mind,

by the time i die

breath staggers

lungs, no longer filled with tinged air

no longer is someone caressing my hair

eyes close, shut forever

maybe one day ill see,

the beauty in dying

 

 

Reviews

[The Ink Chapters]

Love how it cuts short, just like life can be. I think the line "shall i live, nope" could be worked on as the rest of the words are very deep and filled with emotion. Capitalize your I's as a final touch and you are good as gold.

[Laura Ex]

this is so pretty, it shows the beauty in your words about the ideas of dying. very good poem, thanks for sharing. :]