First touch

Edges of your eyes,

soft gathered lashes, I'm

trying not to look

too much.

My finger twitches

(I think you see)

and in a sweet, leftover gesture,

our breaths

sucked in,

your fingers suddenly

wrap mine. Oh!

In

the

space

between us,

your hands

carefully sift through

the passions of

my heart.

Reviews

[shinybluestars03]

Very lovely poem.
Love the ending, it makes you think
how powerful a touch can be to someone else.
Thanks for sharing
Best wishes

[Frantzuu]

Wow this is stunning, a beautifully written piece, and yet you can feel the connection in the poem. The words are well picked and create a unique imagery. Awesome write as always.

[Bella-Marie]

Awesome Foursome. I loved the intamacy and yet it was so non-erotic. Exceptionally written and I adored the colour, for some strange and weird reason!
You're writing could take you a thousand kilometres into space if you keep going like this.