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I was once again bored... but this one has isn't just random... someone lied to me about something big... and even if I knew about the lie... I wanted it to be true.. but only for one of my friends... and so i wouldn't feel distrusting of this person... s

You told it all

Things I did and didn't want to hear

Some made me cry

Threw joy and sadness

Some made me fear

Others made me blush

Most of all it made me mad

You told me these lies

At first I beleaved

You fooled me once

and then you fooled me twice

But by then i grew wise

You never ment for it to get out of hand

You ment to mess with my head

But then it all got out

And now you're dead

I came up to you

Gun in hand

I told you a lie

But this lie was bad

The gun isn't loaded

I said with a smile

All i want you to do is hold it for a sec

So thats what you did

I walked away

Than i waited

I knew you'ld get bored

And I knew what you would do

You held the gun to your head

BLAM!!!

Now you're dead

Author's Note

ignore spelling

Reviews

[fireblossom]

You are dealing with some anger here kitten. It's good to write this stuff out...it sort of eases the strain and lets you deal with things in a non-violent way. This poem is inventive. I liked it.

[Lexy]

Hm, interesting. "You never meant for it to get out of hand, You meant to mess with my head." That, I think, is the most confusing line. But, no I got it, so never mind. Let me see if I can find something else to pick on.

OK, so if the gun wasn't loaded, was that just a lie, too? I figure because otherwise it'd be impossible to shoot oneself.

I think that's it.

LOOK! I didn't comment on your spelling.

[Butterflymom]

This is awesome, and it made it giggle to myself! What a fun revenge fantasy you have described....I love it.