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This feeling of pain

rooted deep in my heart.

It will not go away

It will never stop

No one cawsed this

i did it myself

I thought i could stop

But i gess not. 

I have no gilt

No regrets

I deserved this end.

But the end will not come.

All i do i lay with the pain.

It feels good...

Sad to say.

No one will save my

At least thats what i hope.

Then i hear a voice

the pain then stops

The blood slowed.

Some one has saved me

Someone i know.

Crying over me

Telling me not to die.

Someone who cares

Is it a lie?

I can feel there pain

As well as my own

I pull threw just for them.

I then relize if i want to feel blise

I need to live.

Author's Note

yeah... i got bored... no grammer coment... It means nothing to my life... well... HOPE YOU LIKED IT!!!

Reviews

[Mary]

YAY!!! i can make you cry!!!

[Lexy]

Can I please, please PLEASE correct your spelling?

Too bad, I am. It's very good. Let me just say that.

What's "blise"? Do you mean "Bliss?"

It's "caused" not "cawsed" It's "guilt" not "gilt"

BUt I can definitely feel the pain... and the tears.