Lemonade Perspective

Lemonade Perspective

A Poem by For my life I write

They say it's gonna pass,
and that it's just a stage.
It's not gonna last,
it has to do with our age.
No one understands us,
they all say that they've been here,
Its like we are all alone,
and life is just not fair.
I have no friends,
i just got a pimple,
they say stop complaining,
But to us life is not that simple.
We slam the door,
and bang the wall,
we make a racket,
and scream in the hall.
They say we are a nuisance,
they tell us be quiet.
They say we are to loud,
and stop making such a riot.
it feels like life is just passing,
and what have we got to lose,
it's like our life is a bit of sugar,
and lots of lemon lime juice.
But if put in right perspective,
this stage that soon will pass.
if we are happy everyday,
and set aside our sass,
our days can have meaning,
not just a waste of time.
Our days can be like sugar water,
with just a hint of
Lemon Lime.

--TFN

© 2010 For my life I write


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wow! i love it. its so true. cuz even tho "everyone goes through it" doesnt mean its not hurting! amazing.
and i absolutely love the "it's like our life is a bit of sugar, and lots of lemon lime juice." and then coming back to it at the end with "our days can have meaning,
not just a waste of time. Our days can be like sugar water, with just a hint of
Lemon Lime." great analogy! so smart.
gret poem. good job



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow! i love it. its so true. cuz even tho "everyone goes through it" doesnt mean its not hurting! amazing.
and i absolutely love the "it's like our life is a bit of sugar, and lots of lemon lime juice." and then coming back to it at the end with "our days can have meaning,
not just a waste of time. Our days can be like sugar water, with just a hint of
Lemon Lime." great analogy! so smart.
gret poem. good job



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 7, 2010
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