Silence

Silence

A Poem by ZeStrange

Silence … 
Deafening stillness between souls…
A naturality for one, 
     pure queerness for the other…
The touch, absent … 
Words, absent … 
Thoughts, absent … 
In the absence, two should go the distance …
Toward the light … 
Toward the dark …
Back and forth …
     or neither …
Stranded in the deafening stillness …  

© 2013 ZeStrange


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The love's what! The souls're what! The heart, the beating, the touch, the feel of love's what! Everything's expressively defined and I really loved this poem because this poem touched me and i can't believe that i read your write first as i logged in and now am sure you made my day, your this write mad my day. Sometimes when we're alone and don't have anything to do but we wish to read something or to see something that refreshes our mind and touched our heart as same as a wind touches.. so as same as a wind you've touched my heart through this piece.. by your lovely words and it's true that you've really made my day.

The love's exactly a combination of two souls. A heart's exactly the same living into the someone's heart... and the title 'Silence' is what that represents everything about love because there's no need to speak up to anything to someone when we're in love because eyes look into the eyes someone how truly someone does love you, heart hear of the voice of it and speak up to the heart of someone how magnificent you do love your someone because love has no language!

I can't control myself to give you 100/100 rating so i won't because you deserve it.

You touched my heart, pretty!
Keep writing and spreading the scent of yours everywhere with your this writing talent to make the world smiley and keep pouring the beauty of yours into the colors of rainbow so that sky could come on your foots.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is nice, the word silence actually brings up an old memory. I won't go into detail but - this is nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Consider not the silence is an escapism, it's a positive quality, good writing,
I also wrote a poem on silence, see it,
sayed

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The love's what! The souls're what! The heart, the beating, the touch, the feel of love's what! Everything's expressively defined and I really loved this poem because this poem touched me and i can't believe that i read your write first as i logged in and now am sure you made my day, your this write mad my day. Sometimes when we're alone and don't have anything to do but we wish to read something or to see something that refreshes our mind and touched our heart as same as a wind touches.. so as same as a wind you've touched my heart through this piece.. by your lovely words and it's true that you've really made my day.

The love's exactly a combination of two souls. A heart's exactly the same living into the someone's heart... and the title 'Silence' is what that represents everything about love because there's no need to speak up to anything to someone when we're in love because eyes look into the eyes someone how truly someone does love you, heart hear of the voice of it and speak up to the heart of someone how magnificent you do love your someone because love has no language!

I can't control myself to give you 100/100 rating so i won't because you deserve it.

You touched my heart, pretty!
Keep writing and spreading the scent of yours everywhere with your this writing talent to make the world smiley and keep pouring the beauty of yours into the colors of rainbow so that sky could come on your foots.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a great poem.......it deals with silence but speaks a lot! A great read! I really enjoyed it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ZeStrange

10 Years Ago

Thank you Pushkar!!
Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

You are welcome!

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ZeStrange

Hobart, Tasmania, Australia



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