circles

i know how this story goes

i find you sweet and charming

you find my attention endearing

 

i make the circles

you step right in

then we dance to the beat

in my memory

 

you know this story

you've seen this before

you know how it ends

and it's not your favor

 

so will you dance to the beat

when you know what's at stake?

will you take the leap

when you know it's in vain?

Reviews

[Stu. T.H.]

Circle - It gets nowhere, that is the essence of the work.
Even if that love is transient, will they still indulge in momentary entanglement?
Even when the dance is fleeting, will one still get into the circle?
Excellent questions but unfortunately there are no definite right or wrong answers. Still, they exhibit the traits of a great tale's essence.