The Treacherous Treasure

The Treacherous Treasure

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
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Fortunate... Unfortunately.

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The cycle.. It is vicious.. Oh how it consumes me. 

The endless pain of the pressure.. It is exhausting.

This residual hostile emotion.. Is rapidly blooming.

As the darkness drowns with suffocating fury...

Deeper in my grave Im being buried.

© 2012 Hello, Goodbye


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love your use of imagery in this well penned piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a great expression of anxiety.. Greatly written

Posted 12 Years Ago


Claustrophobic...tension...the flaws of life and emotions suffocating, dragging at the heels, blistering hope on a horizon of dusted rain!
Gorgeous work love xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago


This sounds like anxiety mixed with depression and the weight of it crushing you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Spirited, a lovely portrait of what the darkness does to us if we let it win.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 26, 2012
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Hello, Goodbye
Hello, Goodbye

Bobland, NY



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