The Treacherous Treasure
A Poem by
Hello, Goodbye
Fortunate... Unfortunately.
The cycle.. It is vicious.. Oh how it consumes me. The endless pain of the pressure.. It is exhausting. This residual hostile emotion.. Is rapidly blooming. As the darkness drowns with suffocating fury... Deeper in my grave Im being buried.
© 2012 Hello, Goodbye
Reviews
love your use of imagery in this well penned piece!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
a great expression of anxiety.. Greatly written
Posted 12 Years Ago
a great expression of anxiety.. Greatly written
Claustrophobic...tension...the flaws of life and emotions suffocating, dragging at the heels, blistering hope on a horizon of dusted rain!
Gorgeous work love xoxo
Posted 12 Years Ago
Claustrophobic...tension...the flaws of life and emotions suffocating, dragging at the heels, blistering hope on a horizon of dusted rain!
Gorgeous work love xoxo
This sounds like anxiety mixed with depression and the weight of it crushing you.
Posted 12 Years Ago
This sounds like anxiety mixed with depression and the weight of it crushing you.
Spirited, a lovely portrait of what the darkness does to us if we let it win.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Spirited, a lovely portrait of what the darkness does to us if we let it win.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 26, 2012
Last Updated on February 26, 2012
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