'Oh Splendid Serendipity'

'Oh Splendid Serendipity'

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
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..unrestrained feeling..

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Never did I understand the purity of joy.

You make me feel unrestrained just like a carefree little boy. 

Enjoyment is now authentic due to the pleasure that you give. 


I have been walking dead my entire life..

But because of you.. I can finally now live. 

© 2011 Hello, Goodbye


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Absolutely love this, I can so see myself in these words, it really struck home as something people seem to take for granted, not knowing that every emotion needs to be taught, wasn't until after becoming a father when my daughters got older did they then teach me how to love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sounds like it hit like a thunderbolt, wham! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is adorable! i love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Happiness shines brightly through this work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 2, 2011
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Hello, Goodbye
Hello, Goodbye

Bobland, NY



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