Recurring Mental Mutilation

..the dark shadow..

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The pain it claims again, all attention.

 Fire of sadness burning all resistance.

Melancholy in every word that is mentioned...

Futility completely tipping the balance. 

Cerebral debauchery...

Killing the joyful brain waves inside of me.

A dark shadow consuming my soul...

I'm succumbing to despondency.

Reviews

[lucajo16]

Deffently one of the more sadder piece's of writing I'v read. Thow something so small yet so powerful can have a effect on one's inner being.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

an excellent depiction of one who has lost all hope

[Ladysue]

oh this is sad and the last two lines come through loud and clear...very well expressed...

[Dream Weaver]

Compacted yet still vastly saddening all the same...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you define it hauntingly through poetry~

[Helpless]

I feel the last two lines in this one a lot... its hard not to be overtaken by darkness so many times in life.

[Celeste21]

Completely opaque and lacking severely of any hope. Have you ever seen pulse? This is something I think the victims would write.

[Kenneth The Poet]

You started the spiral...the spiral toward the inevitable. I really like this.

[TJ]

Intense and pretty dark...Strongly worded. Very good.

[Ruth]

Hard hitting and I can imagine a lot can relate, there is light in shadow though, always hope :) Potent work xx