Dont Have To Be Loved, In order to Love
A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
..the only barometer you have is your heart..
Im searching for a certain orchid The kind that people call a ghost They say that flower: It can change you I wonder if it could change my course
Adaptation, it can sure be a challenge The changing of mind, the heart, and soul To alter, is almost like a coward Forgetting who we were before
© 2011 Hello, Goodbye
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Wonderful! Great depth of meaning in here... powerful and succinct.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Truth spoken in the fewest words possible. I like that.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Simple, short, but clear, direct to the point,
I love it a lot! A very true poem,
and the words are filled with power and beauty!
Nice Job!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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So true, remarkable write. I like alot!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A very existential poem, especially:
To alter, is almost like a coward
Forgetting who we were before
Your poetry is very direct.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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This is a very captivating poem. Nice work!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Amen my friend!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Brilliant word play my friend.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on March 3, 2011
Last Updated on March 3, 2011
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