'Getting Back Up'

'Getting Back Up'

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
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..the rising after the tumultuous fall..

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The mind, like the heart is a treacherous thing.

It can fill you with angst unless you reign the thoughts in.

When out of control, you don't even know how to begin..

Begin to climb out, of the down-spiraling spin..

© 2011 Hello, Goodbye


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In addition to the despondency, we have the ability to pen really beautiful, positive stuff. I like this piece immensely.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this poem. Our hearts and minds are treacherous things and we need to remain vigilant that they don't run away with us and tell us lies. I simply love this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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How true... Very simple and nice, And this line :
"When out of control, you don't even know how to begin.."
is very accurate
good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh yes getting back up..the climb out the depths of devastation...good work...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on January 21, 2011
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Hello, Goodbye
Hello, Goodbye

Bobland, NY



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