The Tenacity of our Determination is the Creation of Destiny

The Tenacity of our Determination is the Creation of Destiny

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
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..a crash before serendipity..

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Luck is significantly devoid of substance. 

However, exquisiteness can be found in twists of fate. 

Inadvertent events can frequently result in misfortune. 

Yet, catastrophes can turn to splendor, with impervious faith. 

© 2010 Hello, Goodbye


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I was unsure at the beginning, but by the time I'd finished reading this, I have to admit I was very impressed at the way your words had managed to seamlessly coax me to the final word. It reads exceptionally well and flows effortlessly.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i'm fascinated by luck. and yes!! is does lack substance. it only comes in form. or in another form.
and ahh... the exquisiteness
fortune and fortune missed
and yes again: seems better to rise above the this and that of events

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

words of wisdom!well put.good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is unique and superb...enjoyed this...great phrasing...good work...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

these are all really good words

stubborn and determined are words I can nod my head to

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow that is really good. And I'm not saying it to make you feel good either. I almost need a dictionary to pick out the big words. But it was good anyway.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Luck is significantly devoid of substance.

However, exquisiteness can be found in twists of fate. " two of the most extravagant sentences I've come across with...great write mate...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I wished I had written this. It is true, I've felt it. Beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you play the words perfectly attuned with deft and clever well placed thought strings musing ~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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