'Sadness in Self Reflection'

..seeing that soul delivers whats dreary..

I see your eyes

so full of sadness

with each moment

the melancholy grows clearer..

Despondency 

it befalls my sight

when I see 

your depressive soul in the mirror.. 

Reviews

[Vandal429]

I like the way you approach your pieces. I can really relate to what I had read of your work. I like the minimalist approach and the powerful images it creates. I really like how you start the piece with "I see your eyes
so full of sadness" and end with "your depressive soul in the mirror" it is a great way to referring to the eyes being the window or mirror to the soul. I think a lot of people could relate to always seeming to see the worst in our reflective self. Nice Work, I really enjoyed it.

[A]

Heart-felt piece, very deep and descriptive
I admire how you in little words know how to say it all
well-done

[Ruth]

Reflection can show everything and yet nothing! This is potent love! Descriptive to a great level :)
So much said in so little words!
Awesome
xx

[JENY]

An authentic expression of sympathy…..
Its very touching….

[Alicia Schroeder]

sad and deep, nicely done

[Matthews Reggie]

back with 'despondency'.... wonderful write once again... well expressed...

[Ann John]

heart-touching and impressive....

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

haunting and entwining through emotive pull into the lines~ heartfelt sincerity is the pulse of your poem here~ very well related~