Daydreamer Stuck, In The Absence of Reality

..dreams are to be lived, not to be lost in..

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Commenced from the desire of complete lucidity 

Developed into an obsession of inadequate dreamery 

Walking in the daylight with a blurriness of mind 

Stuck in a haze of continuous secrecy that shined 

The mind became muddle by thinking of lucidity 

Creating a total loss of daily life continuity 

Daydreaming was definitive and opportunities were lost 

When reality was tossed aside and a big red X was marked 

So nothing was produced or implemented by the spark 

The possibility of the lucidity became only a lark 

The mind can do much thinking and still not gain a thing 

Unless in life the action portion, you do make sure to bring 

  - D.D.

Reviews

[A]

I always say : " It seems like daydreams is all i own then back to reality I'm harshly thrown", i loved the last two lines and the whole poem, great work!

[Matthews Reggie]

lucidity...... well defined.... simple poem... brilliant work...