'Unreaching The Undesired'

'Unreaching The Undesired'

A Poem by Hello, Goodbye
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..forsaking forbidden desires..

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I would yearn for it to be a blessing 
But its a curse that haunts, immensely 
A vexation that oddly brings a smile 

It's an obsession that elates me 
Even if it's entirely betraying 
And its constant, equal to a sundial 

It's a heavenly star I can never capture 
Like a delusion from a cranial fracture 
It views delicious, but the taste is ever bile 



- DD 

© 2010 Hello, Goodbye


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hey i love it, unique vocabs and voice

Posted 14 Years Ago


Elegant conveying of intense feelings...like it.
Regards,

Posted 14 Years Ago


ahh that first bite of the forbidden is ever sweet but how bitter when it spreads its reality inside the essence of being~
your rhyme sequencing is sharp~ metaphorical twists divinely lush~


Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on September 9, 2010
Last Updated on September 9, 2010
Tags: Faithfulness, Love, Lust, Desires, Confusion

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Hello, Goodbye
Hello, Goodbye

Bobland, NY



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