Turtle Corn Cake

THE MASTERPIECE!!!

I have to make a masterpiece
and so i open my recipes
i look and look until i find
the most perfect cake to make
the turtle corn cake how great
to make such a thing is quite a task
meant for a man like me
I get my bowls and pans and spoons
my turtle soup and of course corn
some flour and a dash of sugar
add eggs and water thats not all
the most improtant ingredient!
HATE! i mean love of course...
mix it up all good and well
pour into pan place into oven
three six five is the temp
now wait three hours do a puzzle
and walla there it is!
I've done it well I've done it great
Turtle corn cake for everyone
just in time and not too late!

Author's Note

this is basically the best idea i have ever had because it's pretty obvious that I LIKE TURTLES, and i love cake, and im corny!!!!

Reviews

[Sasha]

LOL walla. This cake sounds amazing. I don't know how I'm gonna compete with that, but I will. I also found the hate line funny and I liked that you rhymed in some places. Well done.

[Jennifer Pennington]

delicious!!

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

hahaha well this was entertaining, although i don't see what it has to do with having llamas for pets... it flowed ok, but it was a bit choppy in places. you should've broken this up into stanzas, to make it a bit easier to read. very interesting "recipe" poor turtle. and it's not "walla" it's "voila"
but this was a nice poem to read. reminded a bit of something Dr. Seuss and Roald Dahl might write together. good job