do you know
A Poem by
zendikar
probably not lol
All of you people
Know so many things
But you cant see
What matters most
In the place called earth
It isn't looks
Nor is it brains
It cant be books
Or video games
What matters most
You wont ever see
And that is the way
It is supposed to be
© 2010 zendikar
Author's Note
yeah... i mean it!
Reviews
This reminds me of one of the old Irish proverbs. I enjoyed it!
Posted 14 Years Ago
A very well structured short poem. You say a lot more than we see here in a minimal amount of time. Very nice.
Posted 14 Years Ago
A very well structured short poem. You say a lot more than we see here in a minimal amount of time. Very nice.
:O NOT VIDEO GAMES?! BLASPHEMY.
Really though, I love the way this came together at the end. Though I'm curious what you're referring to specifically. Love? The creator of the universe? Aliens? :P
Posted 14 Years Ago
:O NOT VIDEO GAMES?! BLASPHEMY.
Really though, I love the way this came together at the end. Though I'm curious what you're referring to specifically. Love? The creator of the universe? Aliens? :P
Intriguing...I like it. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Intriguing...I like it. :)
This is so true, I love the way you said it. The only way to look at earth is to honestly look down, and most people see nothing at all. More of less it's like how the government (the smart people who know it all) take are money to (fix envirmental problems), but really just want the money well the planet still suffers...
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is so true, I love the way you said it. The only way to look at earth is to honestly look down, and most people see nothing at all. More of less it's like how the government (the smart people who know it all) take are money to (fix envirmental problems), but really just want the money well the planet still suffers...
I LOVE THIS! You're so special!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I LOVE THIS! You're so special!
do you have a special insight on this thing that matters most when you wrote this or are you just as clueless as us? i like it :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
do you have a special insight on this thing that matters most when you wrote this or are you just as clueless as us? i like it :)
well done, makes me want to ask, so what, then...lol I liked this.
Posted 14 Years Ago
well done, makes me want to ask, so what, then...lol I liked this.
I like this...its great
Great Job
Posted 14 Years Ago
I like this...its great
Great Job
I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS!! :) simple and yet says so much:) i love this:) good jobb:)
Posted 14 Years Ago
I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS!! :) simple and yet says so much:) i love this:) good jobb:)
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zendikar Stroudsburg, PA
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im a simple guy i like to write things that are fairly short and to the point but with hidden deeper meanings! I also love having fun! Read my writings to learn more about me!
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